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| Traditional Art / Drawings / Still Life | ©2009-2013 *MattDeakinFineArt |
although I feel I should have done more with the surface that the objects stand on and the surface actually looks quite messy. I may go back and do something with it someday but for now it's time to move on to my next piece.
although ur not well known like picasso , its still good to know a few here and there, id like to know more about , hence my teacher acquires info like that, like a famous artist so try to contact me my email is deydratrevino4@yahoo.com . thanks appreciate it....
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I like this close cropped composition with the design elements filling the page. You have created a nice space for these objects, and surroundings of a room as indicated in the reflections of the bracelet. I like the contrast between the wood grain and the metal objects.
Your proportions and foreshortening look spot on.
You have a beautiful range of values here, with plenty of contrast. Very strong technique on display here in your use of value changes to show the planes and contours of the objects.
On the chimney of the lighter the light values around the air holes is a great added touch.
It's a sterling piece of work!
I will have to say that the time that you spent on this piece was worth it. The rendering you did on the metal of the bracelet and the lighter is of an awesome quality and looks like a black and white photo. The only thing that think may be wrong is that the lighter's perspective seems a tad off in orientation to the perspective of table and the bracelet and feels like it is tipping backwards some. This is only slight though and it is hard to get pass the rendered metal.
Hope that helps.
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